Some of the feedback that I got for my script draft was to include further range of shots and also to expand on the length of the documentary to give more info.
One of the other improvements is to maybe tell the viewers how I actually make music to give more detail to the spectator. I could include more visual direction in the script and include the titles that will be used.
One of the other improvements is to maybe tell the viewers how I actually make music to give more detail to the spectator. I could include more visual direction in the script and include the titles that will be used.
