In my second addition I started adding on more detail like the kind of clothes Moz5a is wearing and the type of lighting in the scene. I also added what the location looks like for example the walls were white and had posters on them.
Overall I wanted my film to show Moz5a's journey through music I wanted him to describe the way he started music and how he got into it. I wanted to have it a neutral feel not bias towards anything just his plain opinion on things in the music industry. I felt some metaphorical objects in the documentary might give it a different and unique feel and make the spectator think more about what the documentary was showing. I think this would give the documentary more sophistication and complexity which would make it more entertaining to watch for the spectator.
In the final version of the script I added sound and made it clear which parts of the documentary is voice over and made sure to make it clear if the footage is archive. I re-labeled certain parts to make everything formatted in the way it's supposed to.
